Rough Cut from Hunter Simpson on Vimeo.
Hunter: this is good so far. work on the following:
- need audio in beginning
- use your intro shots of the parade
- be precise with your audio cuts - don't cut mid sentence, give enough space on either side
- good use of archival footage, but be sure to cite where you got it (on screen and in credits)
- ask them what music they listened to then, or now, and incorporate it into the intro/ending
- ending - take us back to the VFW
- credits
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