"Aviation" by Joe Cravero


Aviation Documentary Final



Aviation Rough Cut from Joseph Cravero on Vimeo.



Joe: good job so far. work on the following.
- 747 intro doesn't work.  return this weekend, stand behind fence, and get shots of small planes taxiing, taking off, landing.  preferably get shots of his plane, but if he's not flying then just get shots of other small planes at Leb.  stand on both sides of airport for different angles.
- keep his name on the screen longer
- be precise with you audio cuts - cut out your "um" (near beginning). and don't cut mid-sentence.
- nice job cutting from interview to air
- fade down audio after flying shots
- ending: wait till the plane touches down, include some more aviation shots (maybe of airport)

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